I was looking at tips on how to write part of my resumé the other day and came across a blog by Mark Babbitt who is the founder of YouTern, an organization for start-up internships. In his experience, he has screened many resumés from people wanting a position with his company. Mr. Babbitt proposes a list of words that you should NEVER use on a resumé. I had a few of those words on my own resumé and have since taken them out:
1. Approximately: You have to approximate? You don’t know what you did? Or if you do know, but still indicate ‘approximately’, it says that finding out wasn’t a priority for you when creating this resumé. If you don’t know – find out. If you do know – show some confidence, and tell the reader what you accomplished.
2. Assisted: Mark states that “unless you work in a dental office or are a point guard”, he doesn’t want to hear about your ‘assists’. For jobs that focus on leadership, be sure in a humble way to demonstrate initiative and take ownership over your work.
3. Attempted: Never just indicate what you intended to do. Instead, focus on what you did do in an emphatic tone that includes quantitative statements. Examples include “increased customer satisfaction by 115%”, or “exceeded quota by an average of 31.2% every quarter.”
4. Team player: Everyone likes a team player, but simply claiming you’re a team player isn’t enough. You need to find a creative way to demonstrate this point. For instance, you could say that you take great pride in being a mentor, or, you can tell your reader how you successfully collaborated on developing a new marketing campaign securing a 32% increase in sales. So describe team player capability. Don’t just say “I’m a team player.”
5. Professional: Is anyone going to admit they were less-than-professional during their previous jobs? Mark states “In your career, isn’t ‘professional’ in the same obvious realm as ‘I breathe air’?” Mark suggests we come up with a better and more imaginative word to describe how we conducted ourselves in our previous positions.
Remember, this one person’s personal opinion about resumés, but at the same time he makes some good points. If you feel like you want to keep these words, keep them! This is just one more viewpoint to take into consideration when writing or editing your resumé. Search for words that are similar, use a thesaurus and get creative in demonstrating your skills not just claiming to have them!
By: Brianne Bradbury, Peer Advisor